i'm sooooo sorry everyone... but Adala said that she didn't want to be in such a sexual book sooooo.....
I've cleaned up Assassin's Promise and shall be delivering it soon. the plot is more Pride & Prejudice, which is my fav movie btw.
Adala - a twenty yr old assassin who is in the process of finishing the required five yrs of being an assassin before she can retire.
Dianna of Dale - you didn't meet her yet but she comes from a long line of prefessional bodyguards. Dianna and Adala were the closest of friends before Dianna went to train to be a bodyguard and before Adala was trained as an Assassin.
Owin of Foxtown - Owin is a distant relative of the King. He is about Adala's age and adds a very big spin in the romantical wave of Adala [though he does not actually fall in love with her and Adala falls in love with ONLY one man.]
Helios the Bard - a royal bard who actually comes from the royal family. Helios was invited to the baptism of the Great Queen Adalia's first son [or is he...?] who is named Den [subject to change... suggestions welcome]. Helios is the Darcy figure of the movie whereas Adala is Lizzie.
Anyways...
THE END till i actually have this done.
saranam,
A.A.
2 comments:
My turn to say sorry...I've been away and not commenting on your new posts. Now that all apologies are out of the way...
So, you were writing a story that was too racy even your own characters. My goodness *o*! Pride and Prejudice is a great story though (and a great movie as well, how many times have you watched it by now?)
Anyways, I like the character descriptions, as well as their names. You definately create an atmoshpere of royalty and "society" with the names that you've chosen. It's cool that Helios is a bard now. I'm a sucker for bard characters (musicians I guess ^_~). I'm even currently playing "The Bard's Tale" video game, although that Bard is a little more "out there" as a character.
Getting back on subject, it sounds like there are going to be a lot of complicated relationships. What's up with Queen Adalia's first son (or is he?) Is there a secret prince in hiding somewhere? Can't wait to find out!
~Vortican Tod
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